Welcome to the study site for studying Personal Best (1990) edited by Gary Disher.
Thirty best Australian short stories chosen by the authors themselves.
 
Notes on the stories:

Author

Title

Theme

Characters

Adams

A Snake Down Under
p. 54

symbolism of snake

pregnant girl

Anderson

The Appearance of Things p. 9

family life; truthfulness

Rhoda, narrator

Astley

Ladies Need Only Apply 186

chauvinism; sexual power

Leo & Sadie

Bail

ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ - p.131

relationships

Kathy Pridham Bedford

Bedford

Through Road 156

warnings; relationship

Robert, I.

Bird

The Hair and the Teeth 289

sentiment, lost feelings

herself, McClean.

Bryson

A World This Size 355

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Carey

American Dreams 58

appearances deceive;

narrator, Mr Gleason

Disher

Amateur Hour p. 120

indifference, racism.

Evert, Tobias

Drewe

The Bodysurfers 268

search, nostalgia, communication

David, Lydia & kids

Farmer

Black Genoa 327

grief, dream, death

narrator, Joanna, Ray

Garner

Little Helen's Sunday Afternoon 89

inner states; ridiculous visions

Little Helen, Noah

Goldsworthy

The List of All Possible Answers 261

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Grenville

Junction 243

Love as obsession; futility

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Hanrahan

Dream People 36

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Hill

Gates 167

immaturity; jealousy

Andrew & Sally

Jolley

Wednesdays and Fridays 252

mothering; loving

Mabel Morgan

London

Sister Ships p. 101

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Lurie

Inside the Oyster 321

appearances; horror

Eddie Blish

McQueen

The Brush Bronzewing 73

justice; trust

Eddie, grandfather

Malouf

That Antic Jezebel 374

estrangement; exile

Clay McHugh

Moorhouse

The Commune Does Not Want You 233

belonging,

narrator, Milton

Moorhead

To Be Congruous with the Sea 339

fate, loneliness, artist

Gina Addams-Smith

Murnane

Precious Bane p. 143

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Papaellinas

Christos Mavromatis is a Welder 347

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Wilding

Reading the Signs 47

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Weller

Sandcastles 309

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"almost man"

Windsor

The Archbishop or the Lady 218

lost feelings, writer as artist

he, her

Winton

My Father's Axe 297

grief, relationships

narrator

Zwicky

Only a Little of so Much 367

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© G. Smith
 
Definition of short story: brevity, focus on character, economy of language, one simple plotline, can be read at one sitting.
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Notes on the stories and backgrounding the authors:

Thea Astley "Ladies Need Only Apply" (1981) Personal Best pp. 186-213.

Characters: Leo Stringer & Miss Sadie Klein
Advert: "Companion housekeeper required for macrobiotic musician. Keep plus some wage. Interest in an alternative lifestyle, willingness to share musical and gardening interests essential. Genuine ladies need only apply." (188)
appeal of natural untainted primitive goodness
"Hatred and wanting were intertwined, had become that moment towards which everything else had been built. ( 213). . . At the foot of the stairs she cried furiously and briefly for her shame, grief and rain had become one."
locating Australian life in its landscape esp. North Queensland.

Astley's other novels: The Acolyte (1972), Beachmasters (1985), A Boatload of Home Folk (1985), A Kindness Cup (1974) racist attitudes to aborigines, specific Australian moments, An Item from the Late News (1982), The Well Dressed Explorer (1962), Girl with a Monkey (1958), a short story collection: Hunting the Wild Pineapple (1979).

Murray Bail "ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ" p. 131.

My reactions:
a record of the act or the experience of writing
a tale seemingly told by accident
Kathy Pridham in Karachi & her affair with Syed Masood
pa mere fiction, the content is not important, the process of writing is.
self conscious author invites sympathy for him: relationship with reader.
authorial interpolation
a message (if any): relationships are compulsive; are do or die arenas.

Notes on Bail from The Penguin New Literary History of Australia Ed. L. Hergenhan Penguin 1988: Bail's surrealism derives from recent American or European wiriting; 434 part of the literary avant garde for the cool or ironic rendering of experience as an intellectual or perceptual puzzle. In this literature an enhanced role is assumed for the reader." = reader's role in constructing meaning; however this has not yet led to the death of the author.

He was supported by Literature Board grants for 7 years; concerned for the nature of language and writing (542)

His publications: Short story "The Drover's Wife" (1975) a parody of Lawson's famous story. Novel: Homesickness (1980) a stylistic tour de force about Australians abroard; explores cross-cultural politics (504). Edited the Australian Book of Contemporary Short Stories (1988).

John Bryson "A World This Size" 1982 pp. 355-63.

Freddy Unthank, an acute observer, a salesman of many things

"all this success is the result of his interest, he would tell you, in the human pageant." 356.

detailed descriptions are typical of a journalist like Bryson, or Geroge Johnston (My Brother Jack)

An enjoyable story, with lots of colour and detail, "like a Breughel painting."

Significance of the title: the world is created thus, "There is a restaurant like this in every fast city", claustrophobia is a false feeling, reality is bigger than we allow it to be - just look around you!

Garry Disher "Amateur Hour" (1988) p. 120

"Is a novel cut down to a short story" says Disher.

"Amateur Hour" is Disher's best known short story and won the National Short Story Award. It deals with a naive young man trying to make sense of a fatal accidental shooting he witnesses in South Africa.

quite disturbing STORY; its SETTING is quite different from anything I have experienced. STYLE: economy and unpredictability.; tensions and ironies abound CHARACTERS the new-boy narrator, Tobias & the drunk woman.

the significance and relevance of the TITLE?

in the introduction that it was "a local tragedy revealing a greater one" = they have a universal significance.

Refer his 1988 collection of short stories The Difference to Me; & his novel: The Stencil Man (1988), Personal Best (1989).

Robert Drewe "The Bodysurfers"

nostalgia for harmony
the spiritual and physical search the characters are experiencing
this story was a success, kept him in royalties and kept alive his dreams (and ambitions as a writer?)
a readable story: flow pace, colour, realism tinged with evocations
the story of a happy man despite the new lack of status (278) after the breakup and the inevitable kids' fights and disappointments with the shack, and a seeming inability to communicate with the children are all very understandable.
  • a story about what's possible, taunting readers of lesser means?
  • an insight into the experience of the process of ageing
  • easy vacillation between body pleasures and spirit: body surfing is both
  • his love of language: concertina-ed, labiate hills, one glistening aureole, fecund muddy combustion 269, a duty weekend, gambolling.

Novels by Drewe: The Savage Crows (1976) in ideological crisis and helplessness over the genocide of the Tasmanian aborigines; A Cry in the Jungle Bar (1979)surburban experience in Perth.; Australians encountering Asia; being part of yet apart from the culture. From the New Literary History of Australia Hergenhan (Ed.) Penguin 1988.

Peter Goldsworthy's "The List of all Possible Answers" (1986) p. 261-5.

Characterisation, familiar setting, action, dialogue, climax all occur here. Compare it with his very readable and seemingly autobiographical novel, Maestro (Imprint 1990).
"Show us the list, Mummy!"
"Your list of all possible answers is beginning to look like a list of all evasions." 263
Why is it in sections: Section 1: the situation; Section 2: the answer; Section 3 : tested.?
Brevity is the soul of wit.
husband and wife in conspiracy until #3
happy, domestic, developed, believable, amusing. Australian?
amusing title, that we can have THE definitive list, and the point is shown in the ending of the story that it is not final.
"The use of "Yes" and "No" is the most energy-efficient way of conversing with demanding children." 259 Hence this story.
Why is this something BIG, something SIGNIFICANT? How is this story an amusing portrayal? Would you resort to the list in that situation?
Note use of dialogue for realism and characterizations.
Familiar setting, familiar situation = immediately relates to readers.
Mummy and the husband. Explain: "a second front ."; " Another of Mummy's little jokes." explain the emphases. The drama is in three movements - name them.
Well, here is the list. How would you react to them if you were the child?
#1 No.
#2 Maybe.
#3 Because that's the way things are.
#4 Ask me again tomorrow.
#5 What do you think?
#6 Because I said so.
#7 You're too young to understand.
#8 Look it up in the Britannica.
#9 ASK MUMMY WHEN SHE'S IN A BETTER MOOD.
#10 I don't know. I honestly don't know.

Compare with other stories on home life and children: Bird "The Hair and the Teeth" p. 289, Drewe "The Body Surfers" 268, Garner "Little Helen's Sunday Afternoon" 89, McQueen "The Brush Bronzewing" 73, Weller "Sandcastles" 309.

Write a survey of these stories showing the differing attitudes to children and children's experiences of family life.

Debate: "Childhood is a fiction in real life; real children have to live like adults too often."

Helen Garner "Little Helen's Sunday Afternoon" (1985) p. 89.

Little Helen, her mother, her aunt Meg, Noah, Justin, the girl, the shed, the picture box, the bucket.
This has little drama but horror & cruelty; just a point of view exercise?
Does the story have a moral? What does it say to you? Sympathise with brave Little Helen?
"She noticed that words did not always bear the same simple, serious meaning that they had at school..."(90) How? Why? How is this observation valuable in this story?
Is the little adult that is Little Helen a convincing fiction?
"They didn't know how to play properly." "They would get lung cancer." Comment on Helen's grown up observations.
How do you cope with the ultra-realism of p. 92? Is a child's point of view valuable?
Summarise and report on Garner's story.

Peter Carey, "American Dreams" (1974) p. 57

Gleason's model of the town on Bald Hill is too true; the effects of the passing of time; a local drama; the family/village is deceived; values change with time; narrative structure like The Year my Voice Broke.

Carey's Novels: The Fat Man in History (1974) 12 surreal stories creating Australian myths & legends, Bliss, llywhacker (1985) Herbert Badgery is hopelessly unreliable and amazingly inventive picaresque character in a traditionalist family saga. Oscar and Lucinda (1989) is another saga of a great love, the founding of the nation, the ordinary and the incredible; The Tax Inspector (1991) incest and financial deception, greater loyalties, social justice..

Issues: what is truth? Deceived by appearances and prejudice; time tells; cultural surrender; reality is more than two dimensional; adolescent discovers life.

Notes © G. Smith 1992.

Kate Grenville "Junction" (1984) p. 243.

In "Junction", Kate Grenville refuses to give the traditional happy ending, to have Doug meet and marry the girl with the blonde hair on the 63 bus.

His "toneless hysteria" as Grenville calls it in her introduction is very much today

Her story's SETTING features the facts of modern urban poverty, in its unpretty realism: "In his room he boils an egg and eats it with revulsion he wishes he knew how to cook. He sits and burps and stares at the spatters on the tiles . . . "(244). Finally the sordid ending on the third Friday night in frustration and rejection

a modern THEME Doug is misunderstood by the landlady, the "toadwoman" at the railway station and the lady wig-seller at the op. shop. Even the kid betrays him: "It rams its knuckles into its eye the man hit me." . He is misunderstood by the girl he loves too.

Grenville's STYLE of writing is realistic and experimental - no full stops or commas do show the rush and quiet fury of the actual events as they happen: "Lunging his hand in for the keys he rips his pocket drops the keys grabs them they slip his hands are sweaty he rams the key at the lock but it won't go in he's using the wrong key he drops them again but snatches them up before they hit the ground" (245). this stream of action style of writing

Doug comes across as a real character in love: obsessed with red raincoats, oblivious of his circumstances, willing to take slim chances,

Grenville's "Junction" has realistic plot, setting, and characterization.

Notes © G. Smith 1992.

Morris Lurie "Inside the Oyster" pp. 321.

Eddie Blish & wife: destitute and pregnant
the horror of the reality; his own being broke too: "you see we're broke. Not a penny. Nothing."323
caption under the photo in the School Year Book: "The world is his oyster." The paradox, irony now, his shock and surprise at the reality being so unforeseen.
Title seems to suggest that appearances deceive, that life is a paradox,
the larger conceit that a boy with a typewriter could swin in this river called life.

James McQueen "The Bush Bronzewing " pp. 73-86

Why the title? bronze wood pigeon 85
Theme: power of recollection, sudden memories recurring
Eddie Harris & Bummer Bill in the theatre cellar
maternal grandfather's rundown farm and the shotgun
cold implacable hate 76 cold rage 84 icy hate 84
84 a sick trembling shivered in his belly
85 "old patterns found new and wonderful perspectives"
86 smiled not a smile of triumph but of release
The reader denied the satisfaction of an assassination nonetheless feels justice has been done, his actions vindicated and the future is assured for other children.
the old man's gift to him.= "some nebulous trust"

G. Smith April 19, 1992 2:08 PM

Barry Hill "Gates" (1983) pp. 167-184.

short sharp style
a mythic narrative structure (narrative leads to reminiscence thence to resolution
Comment on style: "Image after image ripped into him, he let it, he stayed, he stayed right there beside the couple, his face low on the mat, and at one stage reached out and found her hand, and his own lust." 168
Is there a moral here?
Was he immature - seems he thought so later (refer parenthesis p. 178 Subsequently
Is there no guilt in Sally?

Discuss: "'But it happened. We can face that, can;'t we?" (178) Her frankness, his possessiveness, her lack of timing, his jealousy of the bloke, etc....

174 elaboration of the gates title. How is this theme ironic in the long run? Wasn't this the sticking point between them in the marriage?

Is Andrew finally liberated? Was Hill ironic in the observation about the children of separated parents??

Hill's novels Rim of Blue (1978) and Headlocks (1983) have as dominant themes politics and family relations (or sometimes the politics of family relations).

David Malouf "That Antic Jezebel" p. 374 - 386. 1985

 Reactions & notes: a Jezebel is a shameless woman - denounced in Bible by Elijah in I Kings 21:26,
those deeper exiles who had been born right here 377
Clay McHugh practised frugality in Elizabeth Bay
her chain spoke of attachments; her curriculum vitae.
she & Eleanor Ure went to the same convent school in Brisbane and hated each other.
a stream of thoughts, reactions, memories of a Viennese life in Australia.
"a Jezebel who had stolen his father and left him to be the little man of the house" (385)
Eleanor "who was generous and tactfully tactless" (377)

Malouf won the Vance Palmer award for his collection of short stories Antipodes .

This story a typical Malouf exploration of an estranged migrant in a modern Australian setting. strong sense of locale, the Sydney eastern suburbs.

From Hergenhan: Malouf is part of the growing taste for migrant writing in the 80s.(543) part of a movement away from Australianity to a more locally based vision of 'place.' (544) Malouf an aesthetic of locale, interested in the relationship of place and the self.

Novels: Fly away Peter (1982) a reconstruction of a POW in World War I; Harland's Half Acre ( 1984) the artist in exile and misfit Harland chooses to live alone on an island; An Imaginary Life Ovid in exile- reminds us of our isolation in Australia; Johnno (1975) life in Brisbane for children after World War II- the stable narrator and the unstable character, 12 Edmonstone Street (1985) his own memoir of childhood in Brisbane ; The Great World (1990) Digger & Vic's return after the War. Remembering Babylon 1993.

Notes from The Penguin New Literary History of Australia Ed. L. Hergenhan, Penguin 1988.

Finola Moorhead "To Be Congruous With The Sea" (undated, published 1974) pp. 337-44.

Gina Addams-Smith = hyphenated name, high class family but Gina is a Greek name

hermit in north western Tasmania, the artist alone in her studio. an unfortunate life so far. Is a tragic end full of defeat suggested?

only two loves: Tony her agent and Poppa Peppi the greengrocer.

"her world and her dream were one." 343. She felt the boy and the girl's intrusion into her space? She could not live with the reality of sadness?

"a human lost at the edge of the rising tide." even literally??

congruous means fitting in with, at one with, defined coextensively. So was Gina dreaming to become one with the sea in its tides, rhythms, its fate, its destruction. Her art and the sea were one. She was not incongruous at the sea.

"the one thing sensuous about her was the way she ate" = her survival, her naive simplicity, her unsocialised behaviour? a childlike untrained manner

I keep thinking of the French lieutenant's woman on Lyme Regis, she was beyond society, wild and unnamed and untamed and alone and sensuous.

Elizabeth Jolley "Wednesdays and Fridays" (1981) p. 251

"Wednesdays and Fridays" has an unusual format, not an exchange of correspondence but one half of it, the short notes Mabel writes. It shows the changing relationship between Mabel Doris Morgan and her son between 4th June and 6th August. The reader is at first fooled into thinking it is a communication between a landlady and her boarder but as the last letter shows, she is his mother. The writing is amusing and convincing with its contrived awkwardnesses of expression and the inevitable happy ending.

This unusual fiction shows the truth that Mabel is unable to asset herself; she disallows the outboard motor, the girl, the smoking and the mess in the bathroom but cannot prevent them. She resorts to the letters instead of a face-to-face demand and throughout she undercuts her demands which then become requests then allowable foibles. This change is pleasing and I rather like the way Jolley can show but not tell the perennial truth that people are basically accommodating.

Is this just another illustration that love is the weakness of womankind? Knowing Jolley, I would say this story's message has a slightly feminist edge to it. In this story, she has successfully shown that a truth can be illustrated rather than told.

Gerald Murnane "Precious Bane" 1985 pp. 143-153

Interested in landscape, maps, racing silks, what might have been, chance images.
Refer: Tyndall's documentary Words and Silk (Kangaroo Films) SBS 20/4/92.
setting a graveyard of books and the greyness at his window (Melbourne!!)
Precious Bane the title of the book he had sought and found there.
"bane" is ruin, trouble or woe. How can it be precious? Paradox of affections?= books are my downfall?? = writer lives a knife edge existence, of doubtful success working in a medium that is rapidly passing in favour of microchips?
Is it the author's own or just narrator's voice?: "Someone vaguely like myself, a man who had failed at what he most wanted to do." 144
"He does not understand the importance of his forgetfulness." 150 Do you?
 
This story shows insight into the mind of a writer as a writer; nostalgia at the passing of the Golden Age of Books. His Preoccupations/motifs: colours, circuits/routines, books, passing on of wisdom.
His Novels: Tamarisk Row (1974), A Lifetime on Clouds (1976), Landscape with Landscape (1985) On the Road to Bendigo (1986), Stone Quarry (1986) Inland (1988), First Love (1989) Velvet Waters (1990).
Notes © G. Smith 1992

Michael Wilding "Reading the Signs" 1987 pp. 47-50.

the flower was a clarion of mystery 47 - the Californian thorn apple (jimsonweed)
keeping the seeds /keeping the taboo =the experience of class society
reading the signs/reading fortunes = superstition or gift of perception?
engineer/iron-moulder = the experience of class society
flying saucer/meteorite = myth or truth?
Has Wilding been successful in "rediscovering what had been forgotten or ignored or repressed" (45)? In the rediscovery how does does he restructure the memory?

Comments, reactions, points for discussion:

Obviously this story has had some airing and public success. Why? Its growing awareness of class, long misunderstood experiences in adolescence, a strange event gone wrong, accuracy of memories recalled, what?

Michael seems to be a passive observer in a small locality yet he belonged there too until he went to university where he got a perspective on it.

the mother's unreliable memory ("It was like this when . . .") or her delay in getting things straight, the father's foolishness and fate (at home dying of emphysema from the foundry dust) . Is the title description or prescription: should he/they have been more alert to the significance of events? First half has lots of description & narration, the second lots of dialogue and homey recollection. Constructed this way merely to display various reading skills?

Wilding's corpus: Wrote The Short Story Embassy (1975) as if an anthropologist viewing current events through the fresh but not naive eyes of an immigrant (himself). Wrote The Tabloid Story Pocket Book (1978) about experimental writing. Wrote Marcus Clarke (1977) a commentary on Marcus Clarke's His Natural Life, a 19th century Australian novel; living as a convict may corrode but cannot totally consume his innate goodness. Wilding interested in moral messages - innocent but powerless virtue versus the seemingly all-powerful society. Wilding has edited a selection of Clarke's short fiction in Stories (1983). Wrote Pacific Highway (1982) narrator agonising about what is natural and what is polluted; looks at the impossibility of living together naturally even in the most untouched places. Wilding edited a reprint William Lane's The Workingman's Paradise: Pioneering socialist realism (1980 facsimile of 1892 edition) an ironic title about the mystique of the 'goodly city' - a relentless proletarian realism . . . a remorseless encounter with the slums . . . labour . .and bourgeois socialists"; Lane portrayed social injustice in an essentially harmonic cosmic universe; to reverse prevailing social stereotypes about socialists. Wilding's collection of stories Reading the Signs (1984) emphasises reader's role in constructing meaning; fascination with reader and the process of reading. Wrote The Paraguayan Experiment (1984) a fictionalised account of William Lane's idealistic attempt to set up a New Australia in Paraguay. Wilding wrote "My Name is Rickeybockey: The Poetry of Robert Adamson and the Spirit of Henry Kendall" Southerly (1986). Wilding was part of the new fiction of the 1970s = a new awareness of fiction as fiction, of a story as an artefact rather than a simple reflection of 'life'.; that there is no simple uncomplicated relationship beteen language and experience.

Archie Weller "Sandcastles" (1977) p. 309.

Tommy Caylun , almost white, an almost man.

"I am what the white people want me to " 310

"I was something bad, and black, and unsightly in my real " 310

" You live and learn and live." 311

"You may be what you like on the outside, but inside you are you." 312

"Nyoongahs lose their laughter young in life, you know." 314

"The King of sandcastles - that's me all the way through . . . I cried, and the others laughed. But you see, for one whole day I had owned something beautiful, for the first time in my life." Why do we dream you might say. . . "318.

Sad realistic first person narrative. The half caste's fate? or just a fatalistic view of it? This story a precious memory for Weller, haunts him.

Is there any hope offered here? What are the positives in the story?

Notes © G. Smith 1992.

Gerard Windsor "The Archbishop or The Lady" (1985) p. 218.

Is this story
  • just an exercise in technique, tricking the reader without the punctuation to separate recountal from narration, past from present, male voice from female?
  • a disguised autobiography or the artist's quandry about what to do with the experience "composted away in me for years"216?
  • a brush with fame; what to do with preferences (affirmative action?)
  • - locating on's place in history 219
  • coping with mundanity; for one who has hopes of fame and aspirations
  • "I had seen the glory" 226 believed it should/would have changed him somehow
  • "what I'm supposed to do with these memories." 227
Is the ending: a cry for transformation? why had he come 21 years later to share this story; was this just a ruse to share the bed?

EVALUATION Is this just an amusing story, an exercise in self consciousness and trumpet blowing? Is the short story valuable? It is Australian, it shows the artist's anguish. It develops the characters, it can be read in one sitting, it plays round with point of view, identity of narrator(s), timeframes telescope, reveals secrets, etc. What is your opinion?

Fay Zwicky "Only A Little Of So Much" 1984 pp. 367-72.

a monologue by the listener's Aunt Eva; re-read the Introduction 366 especially for her profile. Note Zwicky's dramatic purpose "the dismantling of the educated self" very much a current preoccupation and perhaps one you feel within yourself as you study this year - the crushing of spontaneity to gain correctness?

casting off the mind-forged manacles of self consciousness, dismantling the trappings of the educated self, recognising the wasteful impoverishment of a mind fettered in absolutes.

"Forever rampant or prostrate, grace seemed well beyond my spiky grasp." (The Last Rites of the Nizam). the attainment of style by someone untrained uncouth clumsy or low born is a better aim of life?

My Opinion: This is dense prose to read but is rewarding. The revelation of the character is its strength and central interest; her difficulties with English idiom and getting sayings round the wrong way are hilarious. Zwicky's Introduction is very helpful.

Notes © G. Smith 20/4/92. Posted to web 28th August 1999.Source: http://home.pacific.net.au/~greg.hub/personalbest.html
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